Hypnerotomachia Poliphili (Drafts) · Track 4 · middle
The Dashes They Corrected (Emily Dickinson)
The Dashes They Corrected — Emily Dickinson
Lyrics
[Verse 1] You wrote eighteen hundred poems in a house in Massachusetts and left the house a hundred and ten yards in your last thirty years — the garden, the conservatory, the carriage house, the mailbox at the edge of the property — and the default mode network that handles internal monologue in the absence of stimulation was receiving stimulation from a room the way other brains receive it from a continent [Verse 2] You folded the poems into small packets — five or six sheets, stitched with thread, called fascicles by the scholars who found them later — and the fascicles smelled like old rag fiber and the particular dust of a drawer nobody had opened for twenty years before your sister finally did and the opening was the only editor the poems had ever authorized [Chorus] The dashes were not hesitations they were punctuation — the prefrontal cortex that compressed a thought into eight syllables needed a mark for the pause that the comma could not hold and the semicolon could not hold and the period foreclosed — and you invented the mark and the editors replaced every one of them with commas and periods for seventy years because they thought you had simply not known the convention and the convention they protected was the convention you were arguing with [Outro] Ten poems were published while you were alive and seventeen hundred ninety were not and the hippocampus that had stored thirty years of one garden did the compression your sister would later open a drawer to find — and the drawer held a life small enough to be carried from a room and large enough to change the shape of the English-language poem for the next hundred and fifty years which is more than the door ever carried out of the house